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Top marks on this task @Vale
✅ you used your own words
✅ you noted the title and author in the topic sentence
✅ you identified the main idea
✅ you found relevant ideas & omitted irrelevant details
✅ you kept the meaning the same
✅ you used attributive tags
✅ you kept your opinion out of it
✅ you included a summary
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Have a look at my corrections and let me know if you have any doubts.
> Try and fix 1 and 2
> Have a read here: https://mediumpurple-giraffe-784223.hostingersite.com/forums/topic/how-to-use-the-verb-suggest/
